Melody & Macabre

Into the Underworld, Page 1

Xiam, June 7th, 2009, 8:44 pm
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Don't pretend you don't know who that is. - So, yay, Melody's alright! Maybe?

This week will be more pointless stalling (apologies), but it will at least be interesting. I hope.

I'm having difficulty knowing if the darkness is appropriate. I wanted it to be definitely seen as darkness, but I wanted Melody's dark pigtails to not disappear. Can you see her hair alright? If not, I'll either change the shade of her hair, or the shade of the darkness surrounding this place.

Feel free to speculate where this is, by the way. I'm not entirely sure myself.

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kuroi_hitsuji, June 15th, 2009, 5:37 am
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- It looks fine....but if you wanna show darkness without really showing it you could just shade Melody in one bland gray color and maybe add a little shadow but really just mostly grey... >w<

naejembocaj, June 15th, 2009, 8:28 pm
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Amazing. - Seriously. I just read through then entire thing (I had to catch up after my year-long vacation from SJ), and I can say that I have never thought about Death in such a humorous way.

You made him into a witty badass. I like this version of Death. Melody is also one of the cutest characters I have ever had the pleasure of seeing in a comic. I like that every character in your story has a purpose and a personality from the very first page that they appear. I knew who Melody, Morty, Emily, Ace and all the other characters were the instant I laid eyes upon them.

You have a gift for storytelling through comics. I love this comic, and I can't wait to see where it goes next.

Xiam, June 15th, 2009, 8:31 pm
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Thanks. - I just hope I can keep up that ability thorughout my other comics too, heh.

I love to write Death as a "witty badass," too. He's always such a pansy in most modern versions, and it seems... ill-fitting, for poor ol' Azrael.

And welcome back to SJ!

Kaiyaweird, June 16th, 2009, 1:44 am
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- O_o I wonder where she is. The page looks great. Definitely looks like darkness to me.

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