Melody & Macabre

Into the Underworld, Page 6

Xiam, June 21st, 2009, 11:48 pm
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To be fair, she's talking to what is essentially the Devil. - So, I finally get to show him as intended. Excluding that one cover page.

Originally, the Boogeyman would have been a hideous Cosmic Horror straight out of Lovecraft. A massive beast of smokey tentacles and horns. I decided to make it a bit simpler, as obviously Melody's time throughout the comic seems to suggest her greatest fear would be humanoid.

On the subject of changes, though... my original script for this page was actually a bit comedic, at a last attempt for Melody to be hopeful...

FEAR: "Melodyyy Corrrviii..."
MELODY: "Eep."
FEAR: "Thisss is the third time we have met. And the last."
MELODY: "Does this mean you'll leave me alone?
FEAR: "Your optimism disssgusts me."

I might still do an alternate later, just because it's cute that she'd still think that.

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Kaiyaweird, June 22nd, 2009, 5:05 pm
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- That is an awesome hat! And silhouette.
I like your alternate script.

Loonalily, June 22nd, 2009, 5:14 pm
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HAT! - LOVE the hat.
I like that even though he's in a dark room, he's still just a silhouette.
:)

Bandkanon, June 22nd, 2009, 7:21 pm
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- Aww, why didn't you go with the other script? xD
Oh well, this is good too.

"He LIEEEEEEEESSSSSS."

kuroi_hitsuji, June 23rd, 2009, 12:09 am
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- I agree with all the pervious comments :'D Hat. Old script. New script. Awesome.

Xiam, June 23rd, 2009, 12:11 am
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- @Loonality: I like it too. One of the strange things about Shadow People is, even if you're in a very dark room, they seem to stand out as very dark - blacker than black. Though they can show up in the day, as well, which means I'll have to rethink the Boogeyman's fear of light.

@Bandkanon: It sounds awfully Voldemort-in-SS, doesn't it? XD

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