Melody & Macabre

The Dark Gods, Page 4

Xiam, July 14th, 2009, 7:54 pm
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Seriously though, 12,000 years and that's all he came up with? - Original text for Panel 4: "Ah, I thought you'd see that too, but really it's my own business."

Alternate: "That's between me and her."
Alternate #2: "That's between me and Mr. Dark and Scary - not you, the other one."
Alternate #3: "That's for me to know, and you to not know" (Reprise!)
Alternate #4: "That's for me to know, and everyone else to find out."

Damn, #2 was too telling on who shows up tomorrow, isn't it?

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WendyW (Guest), July 16th, 2009, 7:35 am
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- Either 2 isn't too telling or I'm being really slow.

One or the other.

I do think the line you went with is the best out of the lot personally.

Pingu, July 16th, 2009, 10:13 pm
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- At least he cares about her. In some Death type of way. I think that Meleody looks cute in these pages. ^_^

kuroi_hitsuji, July 17th, 2009, 3:06 am
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- AH...HE's showing up, eh? O_O

and dont change it. I love the Bogey business....XDD am I lame?

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